Poem of the Week, by Joyce Sutphen

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I read it in one sitting, my daughter said about a book. Here, you can have it. I too read it in one sitting and texted her this photo. What did you think? she asked, and I sensed her trepidation – what if I hadn’t liked it?

Broke my heart, I wrote. So beautiful and so painful.

I sensed her relief through the ether. The things and places and people we love can be hard to share, because what if others don’t feel the same way? This is why I can’t be in a book club, and why I usually don’t tell people my favorite movie because it’s often scorned. It hurts to think how I must have hurt people in my life by unknowingly scoffing at the things they hold dear.

Forgive Me John Keats, by Joyce Sutphen

The day we read your “Ode on a Grecian Urn”
I wasn’t able to make them see it.

I couldn’t get them to hear your voice, to
imagine you standing in a bare room,

slowly circling the urn, noticing
the lovers and the piper and the town,

and how it occurred to you that not one
detailΒ would change; no one would ever grow

old there, the leaves would never fall. I tried
to get them to think about Art and Life–

how one is long and the other is short,
how death may be the mother of beauty.

But forgive me John Keats, I failed to let
them see your hand (still warm) held out to us.

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8 comments

  1. ellsweeney's avatar
    ellsweeney · November 11, 2023

    Love, love, love Claire Keegan. Just finished “So Late In The Day” a couple weeks ago. Has more of an “edge”( for lack of a better word) than “Small Things Like These” and “Foster” but the usual astonishing writing. Irish actor Cillian Murphy is apparently going to be starring in the film version of “Small Things Like These”. Emily Watson is in too, I think.

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      alisonmcghee · November 11, 2023

      Now that’s a movie I’ll line up to see. πŸ™‚

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  2. ellsweeney's avatar
    ellsweeney · November 11, 2023

    Love, love, Love Claire Keegan. Just finished “So Late In The Day” a couple weeks ago. Astonishing writer.

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      alisonmcghee · November 11, 2023

      I completely agree. She’s incredible.

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  3. Marion Dane Bauer's avatar
    Marion Dane Bauer · November 11, 2023

    How I remember my brief days as an English teacher trying to get kids, seniors in high school, all primed to GO, to appreciate ideas and hearts so deeply invested in words. I failed nearly every time.

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    alisonmcghee · November 11, 2023

    It hurts. It just hurts. I hear you, my dear friend.

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  5. barbarasm51's avatar
    barbarasm51 · November 11, 2023

    Sorry, I always read your posts and the poems you gift to us, but had to respond to your message about Small Things Like These. I read it this week and told my son over the phone today he was going to get a copy. Such a beautiful book. Also very beautiful to talk about and share books with one’s children.

    Thanks for your messages. Barbara

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    • alisonmcghee's avatar
      alisonmcghee · November 12, 2023

      Dear Barbara, this is such a lovely comment. And such synergy with books and children who read them. (And I’m so glad you like the poems.)

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